TOEFL Academic Discussion #18
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The extinction of Steller's sea cow is a complex issue, shrouded in uncertainty. Several theories have been proposed about its demise, yet each suffers from significant shortcomings. One prevailing thery suggests that hunting by Siberian people led to their extinction. However, given the sheer size of these creatures, the explanation appears incomplete...
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The extinction of Steller's sea cow is a complex issue, shrouded in uncertainty. Several theories have been proposed about its demise, yet each suffers from significant shortcomings. One prevailing theory suggests that hunting by Siberian people led to their extinction. However, given the sheer size of these creatures...
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too much hunting → excessive hunting
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The phrase "too much hunting" can be replaced with "excessive hunting" for a more formal academic tone. Other options: overhunting, uncontrolled hunting.